Lb
I looked forward to reading this book, however; I had a hard time with the way it was presented. I would call it clean romance, but in almost every chapter the subject is brought up about when the newlyweds will finally consummate their marriage.
Had this been left out, and not so much used as the focal point of the book, I would 've enjoyed it more. I also had a problem in that Phineas was always worrying about how he was to interpret social and personal interactions with his wife, Kitty. And both had problems communicating with each other and with servants.
If a man notices a groom is making moves on his wife, don't sit and wonder - deal with it! Phinias saw this 3-4 times and stayed out of it. He could be at least said he would take over her riding lessons. Furthermore, if Kitty is able to put rude visitors in their their place, she ought to be able to deal with disrespectful servants: some of the story seemed contrived.
Then all of a sudden it seems like it's time to wrap up the story. Kitty one night tells Phinias to forget about any kind of intimate relationship. The next morning she does a 180, grown a backbone and tells him everything she has been hoping for in the marriage, including the desire to become a mother!?? I just didn't follow...
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